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DioCal House Style Guide
Below are the style guidelines for diocesan communications. In general, follow guidelines found in the Associated Press Stylebook.
Capitalization
- Use lowercase wherever possible
- the bishop (but Bishop Marc)
- the cathedral
- the church (the Church is okay for the global church)
- the diocese (but the Diocese of California)
- the rector or vicar
- the vestry
- Do not capitalize pronouns referring to God (e.g., not He or Him). Avoid using gendered pronouns for God.
- Capitalize titles when the precede a name (e.g., President Barack Obama)
- Lowercase titles when they are offset by a comma (e.g., the Rev. John Smith, rector of St. Paul’s)
Spelling
- Spell out state names
- The Bishop’s Ranch
- Bible
- Baptismal Covenant
- online
Punctuation
- Use colons before subtitles in headlines
- Where quotes are appropriate in headlines, use single quotes
- Use em-dashes rather than hyphens in sentences (— em-dash in Windows: ctrl+alt+numeric hyphen; in OS X: option+shift+hyphen)
- Include spaces around em-dashes
- Use a serial (Oxford) comma (e.g., apples, pears, and oranges)
- Use italics for book titles; all other composition titles (movies, lecture series, etc.) use quotes
- Remove double spaces at the ends of sentences (Search for double spaces and replace with single spaces; repeat until none found)
Time and Date Elements
- Use a.m. and p.m.
- Omit :00 (e.g., 6 p.m.; not 6:00 p.m.)
- Use “to” for a time range rather than a hyphen (e.g., 6 p.m. to 7:30 p.m.)
- Add the day of the week before the date (e.g., Tuesday, May 1)
Congregation Names
- For reference to churches, always include the city on first mention (e.g., Grace Cathedral, San Francisco; second reference Grace Cathedral)
- Do not use “Episcopal” or “Church” in the title unless it is part of the name of the church. (e.g., St. Luke’s; not St. Luke’s Episcopal Church)
Clergy Reference
- For reference to clergy, always use “the Rev.” followed by the person’s name (e.g., the Rev. Joe Smith)
- Capitalize “The Rev.” if it is at the beginning of a sentence
- Do not include academic titles, but if necessary you can add Ph.D. after the clergy person’s name (e.g., the Rev. Joe Smith, Ph.D.)
- Do not refer to clergy as Father, Mother, Reverend, or Rev’d
- On second reference use last name only (Smith; not Rev. Smith)
- In quotations, it is okay to use the reference used by the speaker. Columnists may refer to people however they like (e.g., She said “Bishop Marc…” vs. She said Andrus “…”)
Observe the following:
- the Rt. Rev. Marc Andrus or the Rt. Rev. Marc Handley Andrus (second reference Andrus)
- the Very Rev. Dr. Malcolm Clemens Young, dean of Grace Cathedral
- the Most Rev. Michael B. Curry (second reference is Curry)
- the Ven. Margaret Dyer-Chamberlain, archdeacon